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June 24, 2011
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Sink or swim? Losing hope. Even though there are chances of survival. She's considering to give it up.
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Mood: Delighted *Souzay Jan 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Oooh I really like the background. I love that chaotic look. This is very interesting and the girl being centered the way she is is interesting and adds to the entire piece. I love the angle you have her at. Perspective is not my forté so you may want to ask someone else about that. One thing is maybe her outline could be thicker or maybe she can be a dark blue colour to stand out more. Personally, I would incorporate the background design in her dress and leave her skin and everything else the way it is. I like pieces where the creative design is incorporated into the image. It all depends on what you are aiming for though and what your ideas are. I like the emotional sense of anxiety that is written on her face. I like this piece and you should keep doing things like these. :)

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~OrionCheetah Jan 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I love your idea to incorporate the background on her dress. Haven't thought about that in the past. And I agree that the outline of the girl should have been thicker. But I was too coward to fix it as I'm afraid I would make it worse... Would like to take the painting out and add more to it when i have time. Its really kind for you to take time to comment here, because I dun have money to upgrade my deviant account to request serious feedbacks and more attention which i need so badly. So Thank you very much for giving me one! Its really helpful. =)

Lets share more arts here more often.<3
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*Souzay Jan 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I am glad my ideas mean something to you! You are so welcome!

Will do :)

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